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Post by nucky on Dec 18, 2007 20:17:56 GMT -5
Name: Rainypelt Age: 24 moons Gender: female Clan/Rank: River Clan / warrior Appearence: Rainy is a bright orange cat. She has stripes that are red. Her eyes are copper, almost red. Her colors are overpowering! History: Rainy was born in the River clan, and grew up there too. She is an only cat, her brother and sister died when they were eaten. Personality: She is nice, but it is easy to make her mad. She doesn't like to fight, but will fight if she has to. She usually wins, but not always. Other: The tip of her right ear is sleepy, it is folded over. So cute!
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Post by †{S}hreded†|S|tar♥ on Dec 18, 2007 20:23:55 GMT -5
It's pretty good, but the name is not completly proper.... have it end with something like storm or pelt or eye..... there are many possibilities.... also you have no rank.
EXTRA NOTE- That is sort of a kittypet name...heh....sorry if I'm being too critisizing.
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Post by nucky on Dec 19, 2007 16:39:30 GMT -5
I edited it, I am sorry for messing up.
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Post by ┼wi╚igh┼ on Dec 19, 2007 17:29:54 GMT -5
In my opinion, it would look better if you just did Rainpelt
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Post by †{S}hreded†|S|tar♥ on Dec 19, 2007 18:43:21 GMT -5
That works XD maybe a little confusing, but it works!
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